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Rebel Child by *Onceuponatime13:iconOnceuponatime13:

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Photo and edit by me.
color version here [link]
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=Nisshoku-art May 27, 2009, 8:34:14 AM
When first seeing 'Rebel Child' I immediatly felt sadness radiating from the piece. The harsh tones and sad look really made this piece, I think. The direction and model are absolutely perfect for the feeling you were trying to create. His skin tone is skillfully captured and the glares in his eyes add to the piece, though I don't know why. Really, all the little details combine together to make this piece nearly perfect.

The editing on the computer (if there was any) was done very nicely, but there is one thing I would suggest.

And it is the focus (or blurring in photoshop) of your camera. The edges are a bit to soft for this piece and really, should be harsher and more defined. His face is nice, but his shoulders ect. are too blurred.

Over all, this piece is well shot and has good ideas of depth, color, and direction.

Continue your work!
Nisshoku
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Mood: Love =Renegade-Angel23 May 27, 2009, 8:38:20 AM
great work on both counts!

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*Lion-paws May 27, 2009, 9:02:46 AM
This is beautiful. The only "issue" I have with it though is the title. For me it doesn't fit, he doesn't look very rebellious.

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~sheikhrouf23 May 27, 2009, 9:09:02 AM
great

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*inObrAS May 27, 2009, 9:27:24 AM
Wonderful portrait! :clap:
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Mood: Wow! ~thenotoriousmXD May 27, 2009, 10:13:37 AM
The portrait is so real that I feel like I am staring into the eyes of the most innocent of children. The shading is excellent. You must haveworked really hard and it did pay off. Absoultely amazing
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Mood: Wow! ~thenotoriousmXD May 27, 2009, 10:13:39 AM
The portrait is so real that I feel like I am staring into the eyes of the most innocent of children. The shading is excellent. You must haveworked really hard and it did pay off. Absoultely amazing
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